[ time to admit that I don't know much about Kidd because I'm a slow butt who hasn't even gotten out of the first couple of sequences in ACIV but — I like the way you write Mary both in and out of her Kidd persona! there's a very distinctive feel to each, if you know what I mean. Also I usually dislike people writing out their characters' accents, but you do it in a way that adds to your portrayal of the character rather than distracts from it! definitely keep being awesome. ]